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Reply miizj, May 3rd, 2012, 1:01 pm

Geez Lilo, of course this will totally going to work =P

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Reply SSJTakuya, May 3rd, 2012, 1:53 pm

Oh so no one died.
Ok that's great :D

Reply AGirlWhoLikesToSayHigh, May 3rd, 2012, 3:57 pm

This may come off as rude But, is English your 2nd language? I loveloveLOVE(lovelovelove) this webcomic, but sometimes it takes me a while to decipher the grammar usage.

You forgot the 't' in 'thought' in the first panel.

What Silver says in the 7th panel should be "I have" instead of "I'm with"

And Silver's bubble in the last panel should be "these" instead of "you" to make it more accurate, it could be "these from you"

Oh, and Gold's speech bubble in the last bubble is easier to read as "will not" or "won't" instead of "just don't"

Sorry! DX I'm nitpicking, but flowing dialogue attracts readers!

Reply miizj, May 3rd, 2012, 6:13 pm

@AGirlWhoLikesToSayHigh: Oh god YES. English isn't my main language =O. I actually appreciate when someone correct me because MY ENGLISH SUCKS. A LOT. I should probably get a beta reader or something =I, but anyway, thanks!

Reply AGirlWhoLikesToSayHigh, May 3rd, 2012, 7:11 pm

Okay, now I'm curious @miizj: What is your first language? I get by only being fluent in one (i.e. English) and a sprinkling of words from various others. XP

Reply miizj, May 3rd, 2012, 7:12 pm

@AGirlWhoLikesToSayHigh: Portuguese ^u^

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