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Reply Guest, June 29th, 2013, 2:34 pm

Aha, interesting. Is Kotone going to have a run of her own?

Reply ... (Guest), June 29th, 2013, 2:48 pm

Woo!~ Love you for this Kotone!
For once you're being useful. *cries happy tears*

Reply Estarflame, June 29th, 2013, 3:57 pm

If Crystal joins in the league too then Gold has a chance to beat her :D Go for it! (No offence Miizj)

Reply Nighttyger (Guest), July 1st, 2013, 11:45 am

Corrections 2nd panel - Another case where it just sounds better another way. Turn "on your travel to" to either "on your trip to" or "on traveling to".
3rd panel - Switch "I" and "should".
4th panel - replace "with" with " to".
5th panel - Change sentence to "Gold, there's a visitor for you."
8th panel - Insert "the" before "Magnet Train".

Hope this stuff helps!

Reply Guest, July 2nd, 2013, 6:20 am

I actually misjudged kotone. Shes smarter than she looks like me; )

Reply Aragorn199, July 4th, 2013, 5:59 pm

Somehow I have a feeling that Kotone's gonna try and manipulate her trip to get Gold and Crys traveling together again Xp

Reply AzpbEagleHunter, September 19th, 2016, 9:08 pm

Has anyone else noticed that gold is playing on a gameboy color? (First+second panel)

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