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Sidestory - Silver


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Reply miizj, September 29th, 2013, 7:34 am

Alright, this is Silver's Sidestory i posted on DA some time ago -u- (this time i actually managed to post everything at once)

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Reply a-demon-soul, September 29th, 2013, 10:52 am

Mmmm.......comment virginity ???

Reply david000rafael, September 29th, 2013, 8:53 pm

beautiful!

Reply Guest, September 30th, 2013, 3:28 am

oh sweet baby jesus, that last panel is literally breathtaking

Reply Nighttyger (Guest), September 30th, 2013, 8:06 pm

This is great. And that last panel...

2-1: "my father was a gym leader." You mixed up your tenses here.
2-2: "and" before "have some fun"
3-3: "take the Champion challenge"
4-4: "I had known since Saffron City, but how could I tell him?"
7-3: "But to affect her health at this point..."

I hate to critique such an amazing work as this. This is definitely one of my favorites. Great work, and again, that last panel is just AMAZING.

Reply Lads (Gold) (Guest), September 30th, 2013, 8:28 pm

@Nighttyger: Nahh, she's cool about the "grammar nazi" thing! It's not criticism, it's a BIG HELP to her (and for me too, i learn so much when you guys correct the grammar errors!)

Reply Nighttyger (Guest), October 2nd, 2013, 7:02 pm

@Lads (Gold): Hahah, that's good. I do it because I like helping people learn, I try not to be too grammar-nazi-ish. I'm glad to hear it helps!

Reply Aragorn199, May 30th, 2014, 2:08 am

Alright, so they were never kidnapped by the Mask of Ice in this, which led to Blue getting her starter officially instead of stealing it... so the point of divergence has to be at least that long ago. Maybe Lapris and Laprus, or whatever their names were, never died?

Reply Auberon_Sylveon, July 13th, 2015, 4:12 pm

Wanted to do this for a while... @Aragorn199: Good night, sweet original plot.

Reply AzpbEagleHunter, October 18th, 2016, 9:18 pm

STUPID IPAD CURSE YOU SCHOOL IPAD FOR BLOCKING THIS PAGE!!!!!!!!!

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